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“Zhere are only zhree beds, so we have to share” stated Gilbert as he cast a smirk your way. You moved a strand of your wet hair out of your face, leaning back against the couch. Your shower had helped sooth your sore muscles, but they still hurt. That was what you got for not timing your crash correctly.

“Whatever, I just want to sleep.” You sighed, your eyes threatening to drift close. Fatigue was such a strange feeling. This was obviously not the reaction that the BTT was expecting. They cast each other glances.

“Really?” they inquired in unison.

“I think I might start killing people if I don’t get to sleep.” The BTT believed you, and soon they were scrambling to get you in a bed. You stood, swaying slightly, before they could pick you up and probably drop you. They argued for a moment about whose bed to take you to, before settling on Gilbert’s, because it was biggest.

You blew air out of your nose, and the trio hurriedly led you to the bedroom. You threw yourself into the bed, curling into the blankets. You felt someone pull the covers from under you and drape them over your form.

You watched as Gilbert took off his shirt and threw himself into the bed beside you. You were too tired to really care. Besides, the view was nice. He put his arms behind his head just as Francis and Toni began to climb onto the bed.

“Vhat are you doing?” Gilbert asked.

“You don’t get to keep her all to yourself” replied Toni.

“Oui.”

“Vhat?! Nein! Get off!” Gilbert sat up, trying to push Toni and Francis off his bed. But they stayed put, Toni climbing to your other side.

“Non.” Francis grinned, throwing himself over everybody. There was a communal ‘Oof’. Gilbert groaned, but gave up the fight when you rested your head on his shoulder, already fast asleep. He draped his arm over your waist, whispering a good night.

---Timeskip---

Your eyes drifted open, warmth coating you. Your arm was draped over Gilbert’s chest, your head on his shoulder, and his arm on your waist. Toni was pressed against your back, his arm going over Gilbert’s and around you waist. Francis was still laying over everybody, smiling in his sleep. You blinked, and Gilbert moved under you. You blinked again, and he woke up, looking down at you.

“Liebe, zhat tickles!” You looked up, startled, and shot him a confused look. “Your eyelashes on my chest” he clarified. A smile broke across your face as you tried not to laugh. You shone when you smiled, and Gilbert thought it was the most awesome thing he had ever seen.

Toni woke up, propping himself up on one elbow. You took the opportunity to stretch and flip onto your back. Toni moved so you had more room, and Francis was still fast asleep, trapping your legs. Toni kicked him in the side a few times until he woke up.

You sat up as a groggy Francis wiped sleep form his eyes, and pulled your knees up to your chest. The three men shared a look behind your back, and suddenly all three jumped out of the bed and raced down the stairs.

You looked after them, slightly stunned. It was several minutes before you recovered and extracted yourself from the warmth of the bed. You straightened the tank top Francis had found for you to wear, and made your way downstairs, the smell of food wafting toward you.

The kitchen was full of flurried movement, the trio each cooking something different. You sat at a stool on the island, watching them cook as your brain woke up. You reflected on the fact that you were watching three hot shirtless men cooking, and decided that life could definitely be worse.

It wasn’t long before each of the trio members was setting a dish before you, each from their country. You inhaled, your mouth watering, and then forced yourself to patiently wait as they told you what they’d made.

“Zhis is totally awesome wurst!” Gilbert stated. You giggled slightly.

“I made crepes with chocolate ganache.” Francis said with a sophisticated air. The word chocolate stood out from the rest.

“This is a Spanish omelet, with potatoes.” Toni gave you a sweet smile as he leaned on the island.

They watched you as you ate. It was the most delicious food you had ever tasted. You closed your eyes, savoring the different tastes. You could get used to this.
I had such block when it came to writing this, but here it is! Second and final part.

Part 1:[link]

I do not own you or hetalia!
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:iconkittykatrocks12:
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm surprised I didn't kick them all out of bed but at least I got to sleep with three hot men
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Right?
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:iconukraine143:
ukraine143 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
please finish writing the story
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It is finished :) It was only a two part series, upgraded from a oneshot, actually.
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ukraine143 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Darn it, why?
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Shot answer or long answer? Oh well, here's both lol

Short answer: 'Cuz I said so :P

Long answer: So, you already know this started as a oneshot, and after some prompting I wrote this second part, even though I'm not terribly happy with it. Some stories just don't lend themselves to continuation (this is one of my problems with writing actually. I often find myself having to re-write chapters bc I lad myself into a dead end), and this is one of those stories. The only further change I might make with this story is rewriting this second chapter, but I'm not set on that  idea yet. :)
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ukraine143 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
But it was so gooooood!!! 
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol I'm glad you enjoyed it :P
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:iconukraine143:
ukraine143 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes but now its over so excuse me while i cry into the sun...
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, here! :icontissueplz:
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:iconmariofanfiction:
MarioFanfiction Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, you guys. Hey, if you don't continue this, can I? It would make something for me to do on Tuesday here.
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd rather you didn't, but I'm glad you liked it! :D
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MarioFanfiction Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, you are so lucky i asked. I stole my Mario fanfiction idea from a friend.
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol :P
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:iconmariofanfiction:
MarioFanfiction Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The original thought was a Marioxreader as teens thing. I took it and changed the reader part to Peach and added in Luigi and Daisy. Now, im planning some new storie sfor the same characters with Wario, Waluigi, and Mr. L
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think I've ever seen a Mario fic :P
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Konekokitty13 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Moar? Q.Q
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No, sorry! This is the end :) But I'm glad you liked it!
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:iconkonekokitty13:
Konekokitty13 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! PLEEEEAAAAASSSEEE, THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORYS PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO MORE PPPLLLLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEE MMMMMMMMMOOOOOORRRRREEEEE!!!!!! ToT
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry! This one has been over for a while, and I don't think I'm willing to do another chapter. I am genuinely flattered that you enjoyed it so much, though :D
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:iconkonekokitty13:
Konekokitty13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
TTTTTTT^TTTTTTT X^X
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:iconxioitalyprux3:
XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Shirtless Bad Touchers everywhere!!!!
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:iconfrodo090:
Frodo090 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Saws no part 3 oh we'll good job though
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nope, it ends here :) Thank you!
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MadHattress77 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHAT!!! :iconkillselfplz:
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's not a creepy icon or anything XD Yes, this is the ending..
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:iconmadhattress77:
MadHattress77 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, it's not like I wanted another one! :iconruncryplz: XD
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL XD
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:iconartgrrl23:
Artgrrl23 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nom nom nom spanish omlet ^____^
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Alycerain Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ikr?
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cutechibicat Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
will you make a part 3??just asking not demanding
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No, I think this is it :)
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cutechibicat Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ok.....
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:iconkishukittygirl:
kishukittygirl Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yaaaaaay!! Omigosh I wuvs all of it!! XD
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:d Thank you!
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:iconkishukittygirl:
kishukittygirl Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
MMMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm *hugs Author-chan*
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D *hugs back*
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:iconkishukittygirl:
kishukittygirl Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
^^
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Calexy Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
“Non.” Francis grinned, throwing himself over everybody.
LOLOLOLOLOL
I DIEDDD~
This was awesome. XDDD
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Alycerain Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL Thank ya!
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Calexy Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Hehe you're welcome ^_^
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ZalixiaNekoPrussia Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ I love it. Damn son.
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Alycerain Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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