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Antonio pulled you closer in his sleep, nuzzling his face in your neck. You opened your eyes slightly and smiled, letting your fingers tangle in his hair. Morning light slid into the room through the window, bathing everything in a warm yellow glow. You watched little bits of dust float around in the air, drifting in and out of the soft beams of sunlight. Antonio moved his head up on to the pillow, opening his bright green eyes and gazing sleepily at you with a small smile.

“Hey there,” you greeted.

“Buenas dias, mi tomate.” His voice had that morning rasp you loved so much. He brought his hand up, his thumb grazing softly over your cheek. He leaned in and touched his lips to yours, letting his hand trail back down to your waist and then over to the small of your back. You smiled as he pulled away as little as he could and rested his forehead on yours. “What would you like to do today?” he asked.

You made a face as you thought about it. “This. Cuddle, sleep, be lazy.”  A mischievous look crossed Toni's face.

“Even if were to, say, tickle you?” Your eyes widened. He grinned.

“Psh... I'm not ticklish at all.” You gave Toni a sideways glance.

“Oh really? I don't think I believe you,” he replied, looking puckish. You dissolved into a fit of giggles as he rolled over and started tickling you. You curled into a ball, laughing, and kicked your feet. You heard him laughing too as his hands descended on your stomach.

“Stop, stop!” you said breathlessly, still laughing. Toni sat back, watching you regain your breath, tears leaking from the corners of your eyes from laughing so hard. Toni leaned back over, supporting himself on his arms.

“Te amo, (Name).”

“I love you too,” you said, still grinning. “I wonder if you're ticklish...”
Just a short piece of fluffy fluff! :) Hope you enjoy!

I do not own Hetalia!
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:iconanimefreak13578:
animefreak13578 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015
This was amazing.

Me: "I wonder if you're ticklish..."
Antonio: *face drops*
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Gardenfairyangel Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I absolutely love ticklish fanfictions. ^_^ This one is no exception. Well done! :D
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
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:iconhey-or-hi:
Hey-or-Hi Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
My boyfriend found out I was ticklish and now his favorite thing to do is tickle me.
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:iconpeaceluvlife:
PeaceLuvLife Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally think Toni's ticklish. What do you say, fellow readers? Do we test our theory…*insert mischevious smirk here*
I THINK WE SHOULD!

Awesome story!
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you (and yes, do test your opinion, please do lol)
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:iconkurino-sama-alpha:
kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner 4 days ago
oh Tony is definitely ticklish
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:iconsarahkitten42:
sarahkitten42 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
I am extremely ticklish. I am also a horrible liar about it.
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:iconsukiackerman:
SukiAckerman Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Student Artist
cute, I hated when my boyfriend found out I was ticklish
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I know how you feel :P I hate being tickled lol
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:iconmichelle4288:
Michelle4288 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
I am extremely ticklish. Coincidence? I think not. 
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:icontreiannecalne:
treiannecalne Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Student Artist
Let me hug you!  hug me!!!!  More please.
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:iconanimegirl454:
AnimeGirl454 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
XDD
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:iconangel-of-damnation:
angel-of-damnation Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
Literally right after I finished reading this my sister came up and tickled my foot
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:iconmichelle4288:
Michelle4288 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
Your icon perfectly describes your comment!
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:iconcavebat777:
Cavebat777 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I think I would have kicked him I tend to do that when people are tickling me sorry Toni X3
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Spiderstar0902 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Hobbyist
Same here! 
Me: Toni come back I didn't mean to kick you
Toni: I know chica it just hurt. A lot.
Me: Hurt 
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes lol Me too :P
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:icondarksgirl120:
Darksgirl120 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
and before I can even get a chance to tickle him, Spain returns to tickle me xD

and I am very ticklish, after tickling me if you even so much as try to poke me I'll squeal slightly and move away x3
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww :P
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KySive4eva01 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
One word:(Okie maybe 2.)
FLUFFY. FANFIC.
(Okie maybe 2 more.)
SO. FLUFFY.
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:iconrealmen-gerita1238:
Realmen-Gerita1238 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This totally fits me I'm so ticklish!
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:iconpineapplebombgirl:
Pineapplebombgirl Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I would've laughed if reader accidently kicked Toni XD 
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:iconrandom0806:
Random0806 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
right in the jewels..... that would have been hilarious :)

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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol I feel like I should've written that in XD
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:iconpineapplebombgirl:
Pineapplebombgirl Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD great minds think alike
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
They do indeed XP
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:iconawsomeve123:
Awsomeve123 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am not responsible for any injures received while I am tickled.
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree XP
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:iconawsomeve123:
Awsomeve123 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconmeinekleineblume:
MeineKleineBlume Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconyayspainplz: I loved this!! I'm actually really ticklish, and I often lie about it just to avoid being tickled.
And I loved the ending, too!! Good job!! ^.^ :iconbravoplz:
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :D I do that too :P :hug:
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:iconmeinekleineblume:
MeineKleineBlume Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student General Artist
^.^ So, who's your favourite character in Hetalia? (Or characters?)

Oh, and :iconbrohugplz:
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcameraglompplz: Probably Prussia, England, and Romano. At the moment, anyway :P My favorites change every few months lol How about you?
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:iconmeinekleineblume:
MeineKleineBlume Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student General Artist
My favourites, in order, are Prussia, England, and Spain. Wow, we have something in common already!! :iconsnugplz: ;P
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsupertighthugplz: We do! :)
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:iconmeinekleineblume:
MeineKleineBlume Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student General Artist

Yay! Go countries!

 

I find it funny how Hetalia has taught me so much, and now I'm one of the biggest history nerds in my grade. ^.^

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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol I've found that too :P
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Celestine-Nova Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student Artist
:iconexcitedblushplz: D'aww!
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconkalishralich:
KalishRalich Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Artist
Aw So Cute
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank ya! :D
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:iconkalishralich:
KalishRalich Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student Artist
Welcome
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:iconshadowwing16:
Shadowwing16 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Kawaii! <3
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Thank you!
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Lunastar125 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconfangirlspazzplz:
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol Are you okay? :P
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:iconlunastar125:
Lunastar125 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah...I think
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:iconalycerain:
Alycerain Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol I'm glad you liked it :)
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:iconlunastar125:
Lunastar125 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem
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